4. 項目中標之后，我們將立即開始前期準備工作。 原譯文：After the bid is awarded, we shall immediately start our advance-phase preparation.

　　注：項目中標應為accept a bid or award the contract。顯然上述譯文把兩種表達法相混淆了。應譯為：After the bid is accepted (or the contract is awarded), we shall immediately start our advance-phase preparation.

　　5. 歡迎您參觀我們交易會。 原譯文：Welcome you to visit our fair!

　　注：譯文中welcome是動詞，因此此句是祈使句形式，省略的主語為第二人稱你(你們)，而不是中文所含的我(我們)之意。應譯為：We welcome you to visit our trade fair!更簡潔而地道的譯法是：Welcome to our trade fair!

　　6. 我公司出口工業產品、化工產品、醫藥等。 原譯文：Our company exports industrial products, chemicals, medicines and etc.

　　注：etc.等于and so on或and others，已含有and的成分，上述譯文無需加上and一詞。應譯為：Our company exports industrial products, chemicals, medicines, etc.

　　7. 我們將委托貴公司作為我公司在毛里求斯的業務代理。 原譯文：We hereby entrust your company to be our business agent in Mauritius.

　　注：entrust一詞在作委托解時用法為entrust somebody with something or entrust something to somebody。應譯為：We hereby appoint your company to be our business agent in Mauritius.

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